Well done. You could have written a couple more lines with imagery as to how the ocean is like God’s mercy. The painting is awesome and pairs well with the poem.
Thanks! I usually keep my writings short and distinct. It just happens like that. Leaving to the readers to dive deeper and imagine on their own…
Maybe I can try to send something to your site….
Agreed. Succinct is generally better and poems need, at least in part, to be what the reader makes them. Regarding submissions to PP&P, that would be great. Our guidelines are tabbed on the home page. Regards, Dave.
Colors for God 
I’m awed at the beauty of the sky you painted, and struck by the sea’s grandeur
Thanks for your nice comment. God’s Creation is awesome.
Well done. You could have written a couple more lines with imagery as to how the ocean is like God’s mercy. The painting is awesome and pairs well with the poem.
Thanks! I usually keep my writings short and distinct. It just happens like that. Leaving to the readers to dive deeper and imagine on their own…
Maybe I can try to send something to your site….
Agreed. Succinct is generally better and poems need, at least in part, to be what the reader makes them. Regarding submissions to PP&P, that would be great. Our guidelines are tabbed on the home page. Regards, Dave.